Nowadays, students want to study in best college and university for their bright future. Although, dormitory house are provided by institutes, but some student live in the boarding house. This both are similar but they also has quiet different. In this essay, I shall put down the living variations as well as similarities in both living house.
To commence with, those learner who study in out of their hometown. They living for few years in the those accommodations which available in the campus. College authority give the individual room to two or three group of students. In the other words, more then two students sharing the room together. However, some scholars also stay in the boarding house. It is similar life dormitory house, but in this house they have a choose for sharing the room or not. If student want to stay alone in the room then they can be live in a singal room as well as they can live with their roommate also. In additions, since, room are few steps far away from the campus, dormitory house are helping tremendously for saving travel expanses. On the one hand, people choose the location of house according their wish, if they want to stay in boarding house. In this case, they spending their money on traveling.
Furthermore, campus accommodation are much costly rather than boarding house. To explicate, college has fixed fees of rooms and they do not provide any kind of relaxation in fees. While, the boarding house available in different price rang and student select one according to their budget. Some house also give the huge discount. In order to, student can afford it easily. Secondly, food facility also available in both accommodations. However, in the boarding house student had a option they can make their food by own, in this case they pay no extra money for food. In the dormitory house student have eat those which give by the campus kitchen staff.
To conclude, both accommodation is extremely good for staying. Student has a more chooses in the boarding house rather than dormitory house. They also have a option for sharing the room or not. Food facility also available in both accommodation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
Nowadays, students want to study in best college and university for their bright...
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...ry house are provided by institutes, but some student live in the boarding house....
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...ng house. This both are similar but they also has quiet different. In this essay,...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
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...ent. In this essay, I shall put down the living variations as well as similaritie...
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Message: Did you mean 'this learner' or 'those learners'?
Suggestion: this learner; those learners
...both living house. To commence with, those learner who study in out of their hometown. The...
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...ilable in the campus. College authority give the individual room to two or three...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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...er words, more then two students sharing the room together. However, some scholar...
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... life dormitory house, but in this house they have a choose for sharing the room ...
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...ory house, but in this house they have a choose for sharing the room or not. If student...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
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...ll as they can live with their roommate also. In additions, since, room are few step...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: eaten
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...dormitory house. They also have a option for sharing the room or not. Food facili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87431693989 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5529537666 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46174863388 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2841989949 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260189051224 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762138639768 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896904880971 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186744714256 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880762599135 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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