Nowadays, developed countries give the more focus on the education, because they know that education play the vital role in order to the growth of any nation. Majority of people reckon that, if any nation want to develop, they should be invest in the education. It is productive path for growth of country. I agree with this statement. I shall put down the appropriate reason and example in further paragraphs.
To commence with, education in necessity in this contemporary era for each and every person. Funding policy for the education system should be made by the government. Nowadays, in many countries higher authorities proved the free education to learners as well as they also made the low for mandatory basis education for each and every student. Furthermore, if masses have a correct knowledge about anything , then they will get more success in that field. It has been seen that, educated people play the crucial role in order to getting new knowledge about history, science, as well as related to outer space. To instance, scientist, researcher, even the many more people who get great success and contribute in the growth of nation they all are well educated and has a great knowledge about their field. So, according to my perceptions, investment in the education field must be done by government.
On the other hand, if today government contribute in the education system, in upcoming time it will be beneficial for nation as well as new generation. Higher authorities, although, give the funds to education field as much as possible, but they need a more improvement in this particular field. I believe that, today education make the batter future. It today generation get the proper guidance, then they will be do something for the growth of nation.
To conclude, education is necessary for each and every person, because this beneficial for children as well as for nation. So, government should made the funding polices in order to proved the better education and it also work for nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01488095238 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74099181462 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9100953758 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176021890548 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069650036427 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533257759809 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123521718651 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333402381729 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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