In some nations, the number of people who are fascinated about the history of the place they are living is rising significantly. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and then suggest several methods that can be carried out to improve the situation.
To begin with, many people tend to live in old-fashioned and historic building rather than modern building. To be more specific, they are interested in exploring architecture and construction in the past of the place they are residing. To solve this problem, they should research through documents which are available in the city council where information and history of the city and citizens have been collected and remained. By doing this, people who are fascinated about architecture and history of the place they are residing can research and meet their fascination.
Furthermore, many people believe that the previous owners' lifestyles could greatly impact on the new owners' life. In more detail, the more they know about the past of the house, the more convenient and secured to reside in. For example, In Vietnam, many people are delving into the history of the house to find out their house is haunted or not. As a result, they would worship and ritualize before settling down. To alleviate this, people should advertize in media or publicize about this history of a specific place. By implementing this, some people or even neighbors who have useful information about that place and they could provide proper information.
In conclusion, interests in architecture and previous landlords' lifestyles are tow major consequences of the phenom. If the solutions mentioned above were implemental effectively, the problem would be alleviated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he past of the place they are residing. To solve this problem, they should researc...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...estyles could greatly impact on the new owners life. In more detail, the more they kno...
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Line 5, column 541, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a specific place. By implementing this, some people or even neighbors who have u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80038722234 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9190964763 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45912693498 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141747054465 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852924619223 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249210423362 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139103135157 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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