You enjoyed a holiday organized by a tour company. Write a letter to the manager and praise the tour guide who accompanied you on the journey.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the details of your holiday
• explain what the tour guide did that was helpful
• suggest how the manager may reward the tour guide.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to express my gratification towards a tour guide who was with us on last month’s Canada Tour, Mr. Ajay. Not only he has guided well but also he has offered small services while we were travelling.
As we were having tour for Canada for almost 11 days on last 15th of June. We were total 45 travellers with fascinating itenary plan. We visited 4 states of Canada during these span. Each state was having different transport which was quite convinient to all of us.
Well, being supportive nature Mr. Ajay always ready to support in any terms of service he could. I would like to profusely thank him for his soft communication skill because, once, in one of the restaurants I had argument about dreadful meal. That movement he came immidietaly and sorted out everything in my favour. Just because of his wit restaurant owner was convince to wave off my bill.
Perhaps, rewarding with small cash rupees or gifts may inspire him to continue with such skill forever. He may become more creative and ambitious.
Hope you will think over this matter and act promply.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.
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| 2021-06-22 | Rehana Diwan | 57 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'convinced'.
Suggestion: convinced
...because of his wit restaurant owner was convince to wave off my bill. Perhaps, rewardin...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'waving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: waving
...f his wit restaurant owner was convince to wave off my bill. Perhaps, rewarding with s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78282828283 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50193782666 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.747474747475 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5051777905 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6428571429 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133508351115 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373106301132 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563686093303 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673748216341 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733194121808 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.