It is often argued that newspaper is the best source to learn and find information while some people believe that internet provides better news and information in todays world. I strongly agree with this statement because in todays world everything is digitalize also the internet provides detailed information which also increase the knowledge.
Overall, we know that newspapers were good asset in providing the news and information that people longed for in the past but these days due to the advanced and developed technologies it has made easier for people to access the news and information through the internet without reading newspaper. They can get the information from all over the world. In this essay we will discuss about how it is much better to get information through the means of internet.
As we know that everything these days are getting digitalize with this perspective people find it more interesting to get information through internet because it provides all the information related to everything from all around the world. However, newspapers are not able to provide us with all sort of information. In this generation newspapers lack in providing the news and information from every sectors where as internet has been able to meet all these requirement for people these days. For example in newspaper we do not get information from all around the world but if we search anything in the internet we will be able to find it.
The use of internet has been increasing day by day with this scenario we can see that the number of newspaper readers have decreased overtime. Internet is found to be very valuable these days because the detail information that internet provide also helps in increasing knowledge. It provides knowledge related to everything such as science, entertainment etc. For example newspapers do not provide educational information where we can learn but in internet by browsing through "YouTube" and different apps we can learn anything such as cooking and many more. So, In this way we can figure out that internet is one of the best medium to provide better information rather than newspaper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'digitalized'.
Suggestion: digitalized
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting to get information through internet because it provides all the information ...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...news and information from every sectors where as internet has been able to meet all thes...
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Message: Did you mean 'this requirement' or 'these requirements'?
Suggestion: this requirement; these requirements
...e as internet has been able to meet all these requirement for people these days. For example in n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mber of newspaper readers have decreased overtime. Internet is found to be very v...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter information rather than newspaper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14488636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87538035348 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423295454545 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7922728991 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.357142857 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252994828264 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113862067115 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871597648947 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188945846214 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468352034785 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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