It is true that mobile phones and the internet have influenced the communication between people. The development of cell phones and the internet has significantly affected the relationship of people, and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
It is true that mobile phones and the internet have influenced the communication between people. The development of cell phones and the internet has significantly affected the relationship of people, and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
On the one hand, the widespread use of cell phones and the internet can decrease the face-to-face interaction and communication between people. Nowadays, people tend to use mobile phones and the internet to connect with each other. For example, young people choose to make friends online rather than going out and meeting other people, these “virtual” relationships are poor substitutes for real relationships. The result of this is that people may lack the benefit and closeness of real conversation in real life with others.
On the other hand, there are several advantages as well. Mobile phones and the internet allows people from different countries around the world to connect with each other. Connecting with people in different countries is more convenient than before by using email, phone or video, therefore it enhances the interaction between people. This is also a good chance for people to improve their knowledge about other cultures by making friends, discussing and exchanging knowledge. Moreover, people can keep contact with others who they love. On this day, people can live in different countries or go travelling in different countries. Cell phones and the internet can help parents to keep in touch with their children who are on the trip or people who are working far from home can video call with their family any time.
In conclusion, while the disadvantage of mobile phones and the internet is the lack of face-to-face-conversation, I still believe that they can improve the way we connect with other people, stay in touch with loved ones and exchange cultural knowledge with new people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23762376238 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97319257473 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1604339123 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383155957493 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164531052549 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160187663811 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305071193875 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239899558555 0.056905535591 422% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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