The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010.
The table illustrates the export values of five different products which were exported in two years 1997 and 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the total amount of money from products which were exported, which was the result of the increase in the amount of equipment, telecommunity and metals. However, the earnings from exporting clothing and manufacturing saw a decline over this period of time/these 3 years.
In 1997, the equipment sold abroad was 10.3 billion, which accounted for nearly a third of overall earnings ($HK 32 billion), which became the highest earning, followed by telecommunity (with 7.9 billion). Over the next year, it increased to 11.6 billion, while the figure of telecommunity had a breakthrough, amounting to 12.7 billion, (become) becoming the highest earning in this year. Metals export values, despite lagging behind in 1997, had a double rise, hitting an all-time high of 5.1 billion. The figures of clothing and manufacturing were quite similar, standing at 6 million and 5.5 million in 1997 respectively and dropped to 5 million and 4 million in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18644067797 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82444064702 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5401468879 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132942624398 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771971212768 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121871620806 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154490786285 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154223284934 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.