The bar chart below shows the proportion of English men and women of different ages who were leaving alone in 2011 .The pie chart compares the number of bedrooms in one-person households
The information about percentages of English males and females of various age groups, staying alone in 2011 is depicted by the bar chart. The pie chart illustrates the number of bedrooms as well as the occupied proportion of one-person households.
It can be noticed that by 2011 women were the first predominant population, who comprised fourth fifths part in the graph. Meanwhile, the highest one-person individuals in England showed interest in residing two bedrooms apartments.
Firstly, referring to women, they were solely accounted for 80% in their 85s and above ages. Controversially, men showed the least willingness to inhabit alone in their old ages.
Moreover, there were 61% 46% 38%, and 44% male inhabitants in their 16-24s, 50-64s, 65-74s, and 75-84s.All ages people, near to half of men and women in the total preference to settle alone in 2011.
Moving further, it had been evidenced, the overall of 35.4 percent population stayed in 2 bedrooms houses. On the other hand, the least 1.4% of masses were housed in five or more bedrooms. They were closely the three-fifths of persons, settled in one bedroom and three bedrooms apartments. Ultimately, the fourth number of masses accounted for 5.3 % proportion in single individuals' houses.
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Please tell me what are more…
Please tell me what are more things wanted to add in this essay for getting 9 band.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25373134328 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88976641383 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9670579437 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381159909668 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12255381509 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835265903356 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187806485633 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108717973199 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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