some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world others say that economic growth should be scrubbed immediately to stop damaging the you environment. discuss both side and give your opinion
In this contemporary era, the issues of economy and poverty are debatable. Some citizens believe that financial development is a must to decline poverty, while others do not support that statement. They feel the growth of the economy harms the environment. This essay will explain both aspects, and also give reasons why I think economical growth should stop, which described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicate Financial development is needed. First and foremost, many people around the world are suffering from poverty and staring, and those problems can only solve by industrialization, which helps to develop the economy. In addition, people can improve their lifestyle. For example, the developed nations such as the US have a high economy, therefore citizens of the US live life king size.
On the other hand, there are many situations that happen due to the financial group, which harms nature. Firstly, if the numbers of factories are built in the place of the forest, then the population of trees and animals are reduced. That disturbed the global food chain and temperature of the world. For instance, since, the economy of the world is increased in the form of industrialization, then the average temperature of the was the rise, which written in a survey of the University of India.
To conclude, although The development of the economy help to improve the poverty rate and lifestyle, that damaged the environment. In my opinion, The authorities should stop the economic growth because that harms the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...believe that financial development is a must to decline poverty, while others do not su...
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Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ects, and also give reasons why I think economical growth should stop, which described in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86338516609 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3833332665 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215694947365 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677901567041 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675008017907 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138949626203 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820570002524 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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