In today's world the use of machines is ever increasing. It is one of the most important things in humanlife. It become a common part of modern society. Scientist think that it will become smarter than humans. I discover that it is a positive trend. While, others have a negative attitude towards this dependency on machines. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawback of such measure.
One of the main beneficial developments, of machines is that the work or task completed by machines is more accurate and efficient. For example on computers a person want to calculate the high amount data in few seconds than manually. Secondly, the venturesome and multiple task can be performed by machines and robots like mining and space exploration and so on. Additionally, many activities are performed by artificial intelligence in one time period without easelessly and tirelessly unlike human beings. Eventually, it is pivotal in crime field as well. With the aid of cctv cameras, criminals will detect easily.
On the other hand despite, having some advantages there are several drawbacks of machines. It create a loss of balance in society. Because, machine replace humans and more people rely on machines which leads to umemployment. A recent survey showed that 60% people become unemployed due to the advancement in technology and more rely on machines in factories. Furthermore, people with negative attention can wreak a havoc on others by altering the software machines. For instance a hackers mislead the information or stolen the money in others account without any permission. If humans will become more dependant on machines then they will definately suffer from these problems.
In conclusion, there have been ongoing debate whether the machines is more acumen than humans or not. But, i believe that there positive points are more than the negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2119205298 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.823577327 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7199486754 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268445473362 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688351215881 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627389436942 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160278182873 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467800313745 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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