Internet technology has become more popular these days. In this contemporary world, social media is being used by higher number of people instead of direct interaction. Although it has ample number of pros, it gets several cons throughout new progress.
To commence with, regarding reasons, first is that connecting with online apps saves time and provides safety too. It means people have no time for meeting their relatives during hectic life as well as they feel secure in this crime world for travelling far away. Secondly, accessibility all time without any obstacle. People can get touched with loved ones anywhere across the globe easily by not having much trouble.To illustrate, some researchers claim that a higher percentage of online service users have been rising dramatically. So communication by using internet sources has got positive image.
On the flip side, one coin has two sides, socialising by online also put negative effect on the masses. It is provided that without an intermediary conversation confidence level get altered and leads to shyness and fear. Furthermore, obesity is the foremost cause amongst youths due to the constant sitting on the computers in the absence of physical exercise. For instance, students of London university found out that 90% of people are getting fat due to less physically active.
Wrapping up, getting in touch with others in person does play an imperative role rather than contact with online social routes.
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 61
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion 77
- Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 61
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 79
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25957446809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68338279644 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731914893617 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9159485824 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132699380461 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394592528755 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355948838179 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788123958675 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270300281684 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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