Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern society, some people are interested in working and performing the similar things and dislike the modification in their lives. Yet, other hold the view that modification can be an opportunity to develop their current lives. While both views are reasonable, to some extent, I personally prefer the second viewpoint.
People who tend to enjoy their repetitive daily life and do what they actually do everyday because they feel satisfied with their current lives. Also, they are not likely to change that lifestyle due to the fear of risk. In specific, some office staffs may experience this repetitive lifestyle when almost all of them have a tendency to work in a company from the early morning until the late night and then go home. subsequently, the next working day is repeated. However, they may not be frustrated with this life cycle because almost all of time is used for rendering their works and they do not have any time left to perceive about their expectations in changing to the new lives. Furthermore, living and doing the same thing are supposed to be a hobby of introverted people as this personality renders them love to do the same businesses alone and their lives become quite simple without an excessive of people connection. As a result, they may not have any reason to alter this simple life.
On the other hand, the others tend to be excited in experiencing an alteration frequently. In their perspectives, alterations can lead them to encounter variety of opportunities both in terms of career and personal life. Perhaps the best example of this world be the travel-lovers who always desire to create new journeys in their lives by accessing to numerous different destinations both regionally and internationally. Also, they may face with plenty of other people with different cultural backgrounds or experience in some other exotic lands which are enable to render them realized that they may be appropriated with another type of occupation or living area. Therefore, this reason can support the view that modifications can always encounter people to a good chance if they tend to try without the fear of error.
In conclusion, there are some people who can be a type of hate-to-change person but love-to-change can be also the personality of the others who really inspire to achieve the more successful and better quality of life. Therefore, they are likely to consider alteration as their own daily happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...daily life and do what they actually do everyday because they feel satisfied with their ...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Subsequently
... until the late night and then go home. subsequently, the next working day is repeated. Howe...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
...journeys in their lives by accessing to numerous different destinations both regionally and intern...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...ce in some other exotic lands which are enable to render them realized that they may b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 33.7804878049 178% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 965.302439024 212% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 408.0 196.424390244 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01225490196 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 3.73543355544 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85644178301 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 106.607317073 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502450980392 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 283.868780488 234% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6518428125 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.294117647 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253646938544 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831783697676 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519450058598 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165777752811 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237772025637 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 40.7170731707 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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