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IELTS LETTER :: apologise formal letter to library
You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library.
-explaining the situation
-apologise for the inconvenience called
-and say that you are going to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to a due book that I recently borrowed from your library, Sydney public library.
Five days ago I borrowed a ‘Harry Potter’ book which was only allowed for a week. However, I am unable to return the book within two days because my mother in Perth ...
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No. of Words: 263 200
No. of Characters: 1100 1000
No. of Different Words: 141 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.183 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.471 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.052 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.715 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
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