IELTS LETTER :: apologise formal letter to library

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IELTS LETTER :: apologise formal letter to library

You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library.
-explaining the situation
-apologise for the inconvenience called
-and say that you are going to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to a due book that I recently borrowed from your library, Sydney public library.

Five days ago I borrowed a ‘Harry Potter’ book which was only allowed for a week. However, I am unable to return the book within two days because my mother in Perth ...

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