Hi Rashi,
Hope you are safe and in good health. It has been a month since we have met. I wanted to write you since many days but was packed up with few things. I hope everyone in your family is good too. We all are fine here.
I wanted to share with you that I went to a fashion exhibition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety of accessories and clothes there all I could think about was you. I am sure you will love the collection here and since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge the quality and the prices. Starting from casual jeans and shirt to ethnic wear, this place has a wide range of everything. Also, the collection for kids was very attractive so you can find something for your daughter too. I shopped a lot for everyone and everything was under my budget. This exhibition is going to last for another week and it will be great if you can come.
I was thinking to visit again on Thursday, 24th of this month as I have a day off but might wait for the weekend if you want to come along. Let me know whichever time suits you. Give my regards to everyone there. I will be waiting for your reply.
Thank you,
Shreya
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enor...
^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eek in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety ...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19831223629 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15299774862 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3573998566 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5294117647 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232944913788 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743308510665 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487873247097 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157130995357 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330311557625 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enor...
^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eek in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety ...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19831223629 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15299774862 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3573998566 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5294117647 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232944913788 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743308510665 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487873247097 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157130995357 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330311557625 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.