You recently went to a public event for example an exhibition festival or show that you think your friend would enjoy Write a letter to a friend In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invi

Hi Rashi,

Hope you are safe and in good health. It has been a month since we have met. I wanted to write you since many days but was packed up with few things. I hope everyone in your family is good too. We all are fine here.

I wanted to share with you that I went to a fashion exhibition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety of accessories and clothes there all I could think about was you. I am sure you will love the collection here and since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge the quality and the prices. Starting from casual jeans and shirt to ethnic wear, this place has a wide range of everything. Also, the collection for kids was very attractive so you can find something for your daughter too. I shopped a lot for everyone and everything was under my budget. This exhibition is going to last for another week and it will be great if you can come.

I was thinking to visit again on Thursday, 24th of this month as I have a day off but might wait for the weekend if you want to come along. Let me know whichever time suits you. Give my regards to everyone there. I will be waiting for your reply.

Thank you,
Shreya

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enor...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eek in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety ...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge th...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19831223629 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15299774862 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3573998566 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5294117647 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232944913788 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743308510665 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487873247097 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157130995357 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330311557625 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bition last week in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enor...
^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eek in the Ice Skating rink , Darga Road , Kolkata. As I saw the enormous variety ...
^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... since you have done a course in fashion , you will be the best person to judge th...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19831223629 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15299774862 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3573998566 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5294117647 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232944913788 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743308510665 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487873247097 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157130995357 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330311557625 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.