The bar chart depicts the information about in the year 2004 to 2007 various destinations are selected by the British Emigration. Such as, Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, France.
To begin with, Australia destinations is most popular among the people in year 2006. These destinations are selected by above 50 thousands people, it obtains the highest positions. Since, Spain also obtain the second position in 2006, nearby 34 thousands people select this place. Other destinations such as, New Zealand, USA and France not more than 25 thousands British people choose this destinations in year 2006. In the first two years, British people frequently select the Australia destination. On the other hand, New Zealand and USA destinations selected by British citizens just 25 thousand and less than 20 thousands respectively.
In 2007, people rarely choose the France destinations. Although, Australia and Spain both places famous among the British masses. In 2005, almost 35 thousand people select the France destinations and it obtain the second place in year 2005.
To conclude, Australia and Spain are most popular places among the British Emigration rather than France, USA and New Zealand. The lowest position obtains by the USA.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, such as, to begin with, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38144329897 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71703764213 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510309278351 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0528409877 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3076923077 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214086868761 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917716820723 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968847059813 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151935364239 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879347928108 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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