You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the article I read in Times of India. It was published on 20th June 2021 in the name of “Your idea Your success” in technology section. Not only the work was mentioned but also the face to face interview questions and answers were written. I was stunned to see my childhood friend picture and she has been awarded from Mr. Narendra modi for her contribution to the country.
Furthermore, I would like to inform you that we did our schooling from the same school. Above all, I lost her contact details when she went for higher studies to USA and we got relocated to other city. We were in touch with each other for quite some time, however I lost her details did not remember when.
I will really appreciate if you can help me with her mobile number or the email id. Though, I know it might be against your office policies. With the same thought process I can suggest you if you can give my details to her or arrange our meeting in your office. This gesture of yours would be of great help in making to friends meet again.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with her mobile number or the email id. Though, I know it might be against your office...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46478873239 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29890720162 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2135992452 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330634859903 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105551652277 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514424970593 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160729874186 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398209722495 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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