You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor.
In your letter:
● Say which edition and when did the article appear
● Explain why you lost contact with your friend
● Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir or Madam,
Myself Peter, working as a Senior Architect in a reputed company and a regular follower of your Newspaper. I am writing this letter to inquire about my childhood friend, whose details were published in your paper yesterday.
The interview was about Mr.Samuel Johnson, who received the "Business Icon" award recently for his achievements in his field in a very less span of time. The article was broadcasted in the 25th edition of the Business Chronicle dated Jan 10, 2023, with the title "The face of Robotic Technology".
He was my best friend and we used to live on the same avenue. As my father had relocated to London as a part of his employment, We had to shift from that place. We exchanged phone numbers, but unfortunately, my mobile was stolen.
I had tried for his contact in all the possible ways, but I did not find it. Fortunately, I could able to find him with the help of your recently published article. I will be highly obliged if you share the contact details of my friend. You can also arrange a meeting in your office if sharing his contact is against your rules.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Mathews
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... or Madam, Myself Peter, working as a Senior Architect in a reputed company an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aper yesterday. The interview was about Mr.Samuel Johnson, who received the &apo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Samuel
...yesterday. The interview was about Mr.Samuel Johnson, who received the 'Busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8038277512 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81615429783 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66028708134 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0801028385 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2307692308 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273014959835 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900071586254 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647043588577 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127082517179 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916218819699 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.