Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
All over the world, many people do not have access to fresh water, leading to a global issue of clean water shortage. health problems and poverty are the two main arising problems resulting from this issue. To overcome these hurdles, governments and social organizations should cooperate to widen citizens' access to a standardized source of water.
If clean water provides people's health with good protection, unclean water, on the other hand, is harmful to the human body, resulting in diseases such as allergy, cancer,...That is because in places without fresh water, people must use water from rivers, lakes, rain storages, or unqualified source, which contains a large number of detrimental elements, to support basic living activities. Another problem is that the poverty rate has dramatically increased in these places. A good illustration of this is the number of children who must drop out of school because they need to go to work to earn a living.
If governments and social organizations work together to deal with these problems arising from the lack of fresh water, the situation could be improved. they could conduct in-depth researches about water sources in affected places and use modern technology to freshen them. Moreover, clean water from nearby countries could be transferred to these locations through dealt legacies and contracts among relevant governments and companies.
To conclude, fresh water shortage is the root cause of health issues and poverty in the community. governments and social organisations may offer solutions to these problems by researching water source, freshening it with up-to-date machines, or delivering fresh water from nearby locations through legacies and contracts.
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- Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance What problems does this shortage cause What measures could be taken to overcome these problems 67
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...a global issue of clean water shortage. health problems and poverty are the two main a...
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Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ting in diseases such as allergy, cancer,...That is because in places without fres...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
... in diseases such as allergy, cancer,...That is because in places without fresh wate...
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Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
..., or unqualified source, which contains a large number of detrimental elements, to support basic ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...water, the situation could be improved. they could conduct in-depth researches about...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
...th issues and poverty in the community. governments and social organisations may offer solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49812734082 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82939900766 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.463061558 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070259657976 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320143340538 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248437635197 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05061406147 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163162326986 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.