Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best, these methods are ineffective and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent you agree?
Irrefutably, it is a fact that if health is gone, everything is gone. In the epic era, more and more people are turning to alternative systems of medicine for the cure of many diseases. However these forms of medicine are detrimental to health. Nevertheless, there are plethora of masses who believe that these forms of predicament have adverse effects on human health. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, alternative medication is not harmful and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints of this view in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the alternative forms of nostrums such as Ayurveda, Homeopathy and Naturopathy are increasingly gaining popularity. There are number of reasons behind this. Firstly, there are fewer side effects of these kinds of drugs. Even if they fail to deliver immediate results, but it can provide long lasting relief from many digestive and respiratory illness. For example, according to the survey, it can be manifested that 90% of the diseases of digestion and respiration are cured by alternative drugs. Secondly, these forms of medicine are less invasive and cheaper as compared to the modern medicine. Sometimes, middle classes of people cannot afford expensive methods of treatment, but these alternative medicines are profitable for them according to their condition. Owing to this, artificial insemination is beneficial.
Moving further, a lot of diseases can be cured effectively with faith healing. Like Ayurvedic massage is the best treatment for spinal cord compression. Also, according to some health practitioners it is observed that, some unconventional medicines are highly effective for serious problems such as cancer. The holistic system of medicines are now a separate field of medicine and many researches are carried out in this field. Through these researches, health practitioners are trying to discover new medicinal wonders in nature.
In compendium, I believe that unorthodox medicines can cure many diseases. They are not harmful. They are beneficial for human beings as they have no side effects and are less invasive and cheap compared to allopathic medicines.
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35398230088 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96770409597 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9551117858 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4090909091 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180244619075 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547198176624 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448813525733 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112952944733 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216818336418 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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