No one can deny, today parents are extremely concerned about their offspring future. Putting a lot of pressure on children by their parents. Their are several reasons likewise, parents want successful like for their child and many more. Those things have a positive as well as negative impact however, in this essay I will discuss both sides alongside give the appropriate reasons and examples in further paragraphs.
To commence with, parents believed that, their child never give concentration on their work, if they do not put a lot of pressure on the child. So, a lot of pressure is put by the parents on the child. When parents forced their children to do something then children are also given more attention to that work. Take a student's marks as an example. The majority of parents asked their children to do a study with fully concentration and they forced their child. As a result, children got excellent marks in the final exam and it worth for their future. This is the one major positive side of this thing.
Apart from this, it creates a harmful impact on offspring life, especially on the brain and health. In other words. Although parents pressurised their children for the benefit of their life, they never realized that in future their child faces serious diseases such as depression, brain damage, and many other health issues. Take a recent research report of specialist brain doctors as an example. Doctors always told the parents, when they forced their child for doing something after a few times brain of children frequently thinks only about that specific work as a result of children suffering from depression. More than 65% of children face depression nowadays because their parents put a lot of pressure. The second major negative point is that children never do the activities according to their interests. Mostly, parents forced their children about those things which have a high success rate in future but they think about the interest of the child and children do not do focus on other things.
To conclude, putting pressure on a child have a more negative impact rather than a positive impact. Mostly children suffering with serious problems and sometimes they face this problem lifetime. Parents forced their children to a successful life but they forget that pressure is a cause of several problems. Alongside, children never perform the activities according to their interest and it is the reason children face failure in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, second, so, then, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01459854015 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50836123477 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452554744526 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3017316945 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6086956522 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387950854916 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129966022322 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641347021865 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286331231527 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299542004431 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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