There are different types of job in the world and everyone can do any job based on their interest, skills, and academic qualification. Some people work for same organisation during their whole working life while some says that one should work for different organisation.
Advocates of the former side might think that working for the single organisation built their long term relationship with employees and this can increase the job security. Also, sticking to one organisation can increase the chances of promotion. Moreover, the people who are working in the same organisation have more salary than job shifter. In addition to this, they believe that working in a same organisation can make the atmosphere around the worker more comfortable as because worker become more familiar with company and they can add more efforts to enhance the profit of company.
On the other hand, other believe that if a person changes his organisation it impact a lot of benefit to one's career. Firstly, it enhance the social network of the person. By working in different organisation increases the experience of individual and thus, increases the chances of employment of person. Although it decreases the job security ,but increases the satisfaction rate. Also, the person get more chances to explore the jobs and if gets satisfied job, he can continue it for later life.
All in all, i think that there should be the diversity in job. One should first think of self satisfaction beyond money. So people should try to work in different organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, while, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80526618148 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7655625816 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365252808984 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129517190853 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131731961455 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239821140871 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104786571519 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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