It is true that, in this contemporary era, commuting and working are being gained lots of popularity at an unprecedented rate among school leavers. Furthermore, this essay has some drawbacks as well as postive effect. According to my perspective, it creates a positive impact on students.
To commence with, some students introspect that after higher education or before taking admission in colleges, travelling and working should be done by them. First and foremost, world is wanted to be explored by them. Additionally, due to some financial problems, they have to do some work and save some money for taking addmission in colleges .Secondly, sometimes they give their time for cracking some toughest exam rather than spending time on theoretical knowledge. Last but not leat, they take time because they want to clear their visions first, what they want to be rather than spending money on wasteful things. For instance, I have left my studies after my higher education because I want to go abroad and it is taking time but still I am not wasting my money like my friends.
Looking at the other view, admissions in colleges should be taken by students as soon as possible after passing higher education otherwise, they will start losing their confidence or motivation level. Another reason could be, they will give more concentration on their job or promotion for money which can easily delay their education in long term. Thirdly, it escalates gap between students studies and sometimes Colleges or institutions do not accept these students then they start feeling irritating or frustrating while look their parents face because of number of responsibilities. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 52% students who prefer to travel or do work after passing from school, they have to face overabundance of obstacles in their life instead of those who do not take any gap.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly taking break after higher studies has some demerits yet, we must understand that students have their own right to choose their career and if they take some time then it is not a worrying trend. That is why I personally contemplate that it has more positive effects rather than negative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05675675676 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7718571592 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0155789808 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.642857143 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150775769459 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505855391303 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511817814384 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860366424124 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515440585939 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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