It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated day by day in all over the world mostly in youngsters and it has become a main issue. Furthermore, government should start some campaign, attention should be given by parents and so on.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, television and smartphone are the responsibile for this cause because children like watching action movies and try to use this things in their life like, kidnapping, robbery, murders e.t.c. Secondly, parents are bussy in their own work and they don't take care of their children that is why they prefer to adapt bad habbit or fall in the bad communities. For example, I have my one best friend he used to watch lots of movies and these days he has addicted to that and nowadays he is committing crime.
Looking on the solutions, a numbers of camping should be started by government in which they provide good moral lessons to children in funny ways. In addition, government should also pass some draconian rule against these type of channels which provide wrong content. Moreover, parents' must give some time to their children and go out for picnic with them and on any place so children feel far better as compared to anything.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly crime is increasing we know very well and it is not good for our societies or for country as well yet, we must understand that parents also play a vital role in children life they should always support their children in everything and government should provide some laws against it.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e watching action movies and try to use this things in their life like, kidnapping, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ts are bussy in their own work and they dont take care of their children that is why...
^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n any place so children feel far better as compared to anything. On a concludin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54366424709 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.414883535 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8888888889 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818982544528 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362037993393 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180206474041 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519423067487 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138795603216 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e watching action movies and try to use this things in their life like, kidnapping, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ts are bussy in their own work and they dont take care of their children that is why...
^^^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n any place so children feel far better as compared to anything. On a concludin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54366424709 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.414883535 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.222222222 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8888888889 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818982544528 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362037993393 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180206474041 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519423067487 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138795603216 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.