Honey bee proccess
The diagram demonstrates honey-producing by bees which devided into seven steps. This process is initiated by hive-making proccess and finished by funneling honey into jars.
Initially, bees coorporating together to make a large hive, a container where bees live which each column will be placed for honey bees. After this process, bees fly surroundings flowers area in terms of finding nectar which a sweet liquid produced by flower, stopping at flower and collecting its nectar. The next step is saving nectars carried by bees into hexagonal-shaped cells, before the bees balance their wings to turn the nectar into honey. Then, water will evaporated the raw honey-bee, warming it up in required heat to change it into gas.
Eventually, honey is produced completely, being ready to be shared in jars, so it can be sold to manufactures. In manufactures, people can purchase the honey and consum it due to its healthy and sweetness.
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- The graph below gives the results of a survey showing what 1000 young people did after leaving school between 2008 and 2012 69
- Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society Because of this all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
- Due to population growth many people these days live in apartments with limited space and no outdoor areas Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages 84
- Some people say that animals can be used in any way for the benefit of humans Others say that exploiting animals for human purposes is not acceptable Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities causes advantages outwieugh 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'evaporate'
Suggestion: evaporate
...the nectar into honey. Then, water will evaporated the raw honey-bee, warming it up in req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19078947368 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95205659802 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4558320033 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401853247745 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170489708188 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733322788783 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252289239459 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103145989868 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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