eventhough doctors all over the world aree that fast food is bad for people health, more and more people are eating it
-why?
-what can be done abt this problem
Fast food is unhealthy according to the experts, but the consumers is arising due to its deliciousness. However, people should be educated to a healthy diet to balance this eating habit
Nowadays, the deliciousness in junk food successfully entraps the consumers because the abundance of ingridients make mouthfeel tasted unlike other natural food. Moreover, this pleasure from consuming can be a temporary boost, which can also stimulates another purchase. For example, Bittersweet by Najla, restaurant in Indonesia innovating its menu by intregrating the cake with other uncommon additives, including boba and nastar. Fortunately, for its rare deliciousness, it attracts the consumers, ranging one of the most ordered restaurant in Indonesia in 2020, according to IBF or Indonesia Business Forum annual survey
Aside from the cause, educating people about healthy lifestyle is crucial to decrease the prevalent trend of junk food consumption, acknowledging its bad impact for the body, and also encouraging to eat more healthy meal. Such a movement can be aplicated in household by parents, community, or even from government policy. Food education in family for example, the cultural practices of avoiding junk food in home while empowering children to take charge of their own health will unconsiously build children eating behaviors. Further, these practices can influeced children eating in the future.
In conclusion, despite doctors contradictive agreement towards junk food, more people are consuming it because of its delicious taste. It is suggested to the eaters to balance their eating by learning about nutrition and healthy eating
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: eating
...pact for the body, and also encouraging to eat more healthy meal. Such a movement can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6546184739 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01391642195 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.3132239325 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.8 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254050562948 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936218121877 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439547917695 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159565330745 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431017319981 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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