When travelling back on the train last week you lost your wallet. The wallet contains some valuable things. Write a letter to station managers. Say when and where you left your wallet. Describe the wallet and what was in it. Say how you will collect th

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When travelling back on the train last week you lost your wallet. The wallet contains some valuable things. Write a letter to station managers.
 Say when and where you left your wallet.
 Describe the wallet and what was in it.
 Say how you will collect the wallet.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to a lost property that I lost in a train last Friday.

On the 21st of March, I took a train from Central station to Strathfield. As I took it on the way back home, I might assume that the train I got on leaved central station around 5.45pm. I was extremely exhausted, so I fell asleep on a last carriage of the train. I guess that I dropped while I was asleep.

This wallet is greatly valuable for me since it had been passed on from my father. It may seem looked old, however, It has all my precious memories with it. This was made of a black le...

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