It is considered by some mortals that getting moral values from parents is more fruitful than studying in educational institution I am not completely agree with this ,and I will discuss my view points in the upcoming paragraphs
To commence with,it is a opinion of that people who think that only ethics are important ,they believe that nowadays in schools children do not pay full attention and they may choose a wrong company that will be not good for them this is also one main of the reasons . Moreover , nowadays children have only book knowledge they do not know how to respect elders and what is the benefit of spending time with parents ,so that is why people think that morals are important for a child's development
On the other hand, schooling education also plays an essential role , because teachers are considered as second god , children can learn many skills from the school for example how to co-operate with others which is essential for them and main thing is that they can do practical work at school which is not possible at home because there is not a that kind of environment ,so school is paramount for them
To conclude , Although moral values are important for children but the importance of schooling education cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, second, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85648148148 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55068800434 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 108.0 20.2975951904 532% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.5 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 524.5 106.682146367 492% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 108.0 20.7667163134 520% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.5 7.06120827912 545% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201254142955 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165131072668 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00904310324512 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128485357865 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290242429677 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 55.5 13.0946893788 424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.68 50.2224549098 -59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 44.2 11.3001002004 391% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.06 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.2 10.1190380762 447% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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