Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing this to bring your attention towards the pity condition of a historical monument which dates back to 17th century. Its King Stefan’s palace and is root of our town as the town was set up by him. Therefore, in honour of the founder, his palace needs to be preserved.
Although the interior of the building is quite perfect and doesn’t need any renovations right now but the thing of concern is the exterior. Not to mention, its an old architecture, so due to nature’s wear and tear theory, it is supposed to show signs of aging. But it cannot be left in its miserable condition to demolish. Apart from this there is any empty place at the far left corner which has become home to weeds and insects. As a result, people hesitate to visit this place.
As it has been a tourist attraction for a long time and contributed to the economy of the town, it is high time, we paid it back. In order to continue to keep it a tourist place, its outer walls ought to be renovated. Besides, the inner empty corner should be used to set up a canteen for visitors.
I am looking forward to receiving a positive response.
Yours faithfully
Sophia Sandhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a positive response. Yours faithfully Sophia Sandhu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, so, therefore, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53023255814 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55782661934 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4462673609 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144959470597 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464888688176 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465909852754 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062183561448 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444586416802 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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