Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
In the 21st century, the Internet is an indispensable part of our lives. Although a lot of people question the benefits of the Internet due to the excessive usage and quick accessibility of the information, there is no doubt for me that the internet has improved our world and it is going to make it even better in the future. I feel this way for a couple of reasons which I will explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the development of the internet has allowed us to reach information more quickly and easily. A student, from any level of education, gets access to myriad information from the world's most visited website, Google. From a simple math problem to complex differential calculus, Google has answers to all problems. Another way to illustrate this, if you are a graduate student who looks for a specific article for your term paper, it is possible to read the article through a variety of online archives that offer thousands of academic articles. Therefore, the internet plays a major role in the information flow which is essential for us to expand our knowledge and enhance our abilities.
Moreover, the widespread use of the Internet provided us an enormous communication network that we can use to connect to our relatives. If you are living in a different country for your education, you can do a video chat with your parents. Additionally, these platforms increased the number of philanthropic activities through online charities. For instance, unfortunately, there has been a great number of forest fires in my country recently, and we have done our best to send help to the disaster areas by allocating money through these charities.
While critics argue that the spread of terrorism also takes place through the internet, and cybercriminals get access to our data through the internet, these incidents are monitored closely by the national security agencies. In a country like India and China, although tracking the daily internet usage of the common citizens, seems preposterous, but the security agencies such as India's NSA (National Security Agency) and IB (Intelligence Bureau) and China's 610 office, have always done commendable work on doing so. The spread of terrorism in these countries has been in check since the last known world-famous terrorist Osama Bin Laden.
In conclusion, it is an eternal debate on the positivity and negativity of the internet, based on the examples and scenarios presented above. However, one can logically conclude that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ighs the disadvantages of the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08551068884 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89991166189 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574821852732 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8895023624 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.941176471 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16081659357 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493956089726 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475226600434 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836679385462 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340518761629 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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