Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans can not live in a society without making relationships. To build up a cooperative relation and belief in each other, always telling the truth can be better considerations in any relationship.
First, for a cooperative relationship, people should maintain always clarity with their partners by saying the truth. People sometimes can pass a hard time. If they share by saying the truth with their partner, their partner can help him by providing advice, motivations, or any other information that works best for them. It is not an accident. For instance, two months ago I fell into an economical crisis because I lost my job. I did not want to share this with my best friend Akash, I just lied to him that I have no problems. He asked me about why the sad expression on my face. Then I realized that there should not be kept secret among partners. When I said the truth, then my friend told me that there is an opening in his office and I should apply for it as soon as possible. And that's how telling truth to your partner whatever the bad situation you are passing can come up with a cooperative relationship.
Second, to construct a superb belief in each other, people should talk always truth with their partners. One can easily destroy a relationship with his partner by saying a lie. For example, My uncle and his wife are passing a very hard time with their relationship. One month ago, my uncle was spotted in a restaurant with his female colleague at an office meeting. One of the aunty's friends saw them and she said to aunty about this. One day at night, aunty started to talk about this incident with my uncle. At first, my uncle wanted to be nice to his wife and fear has been felt in his mind in such a way that if he tells the truth, then his wife can get angry. That's why my uncle denied that he was at a restaurant with a woman on that day. That incident has almost broken their belief to each other and so their relationship. If my uncle would say the truth that he was a meeting which was about office works, this bad situation might not have happened at all. I think, in such a way, one can destroy belief which is the most principal pillar of a good relationship.
In conclusion, thus with the above in mind, in the long run, promoting telling the truth will lead to the betterment of all involved because it is a basis to build up a long-lasting and cooperative relationship among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'maintain'.
Suggestion: always maintain
...cooperative relationship, people should maintain always clarity with their partners by saying t...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...instance, two months ago I fell into an economical crisis because I lost my job. I did not...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...d apply for it as soon as possible. And thats how telling truth to your partner whate...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'talk'.
Suggestion: always talk
...erb belief in each other, people should talk always truth with their partners. One can easi...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... them and she said to aunty about this. One day at night, aunty started to talk abo...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...the truth, then his wife can get angry. Thats why my uncle denied that he was at a re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47404063205 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58904768481 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471783295711 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5191329251 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4583333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162417841312 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526146336572 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549410147839 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114841513463 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023606451657 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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