The graph shows information about how much people in the United State and the United kingdom spend on petrol.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevent.
The graph shows a comparison between the amount of money spent on petrol in different classes of society in UK and USA.
First we see that the percentage of income in the USA populations is higher than that of UK ,there is a gradual increase from 4 to 5 % in the poorest class in USA until it reaches a certain stability ,while the poorest class in UK shows the contrary of it as there is a less percentage that is rising dramatically.
In both middle and richest classes of USA we see a slight decrease in the amount of money spent on petrol ,and in the same classes of UK we see a complete difference as the percentage of income is rising to about 4 % .
In conclusion we notice that the poorest and middle income US population spend more money in comparison to UK as they have higher percentage of income while there is a rapprochement in the income in the richest class of both countries .
- The graph shows information about how much people in the United State and the United kingdom spend on petrol summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent 75
- It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 40
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