How do you feel about birthdays? Do you think they are important? How would you choose to celebrate your birthday if you could do anything you wanted?
I personally suppose that my birthday is a remarkable day for myself and my parents. It was the only day that my mom was happy when I was crying. These days are significant, but not to be celebrated with a huge gathering. It's a day to admire the desert that my parents have created.
My mom who is difficult to be born gives the best anything for me, so I think that I should celebrate a cozy party to show my gratitude to my mom.
Moreover, I want to go to the pagoda in order to pray for the best things for people and do some charity there. I also hope I can do more useful things to help people who are homeless, disadvantaged in life, handicapped, or old people living alone... On my birthday, if I have some free time, I will go to my hometown to visit my grandmother and enjoy some dishes made by her.
When I was young, I liked traveling to famous places or celebrating parties with my friends, but now, I really want to spend my birthdays with my family. I dislike loud environments or costly meals that make me feel like I'm wasting my time, money, and health.
As I grew older, I became more introverted, preferring valuable spirits to valuable physical and spending more time with my loves.
I always desire to bring the best things for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...to be celebrated with a huge gathering. Its a day to admire the desert that my pare...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other and enjoy some dishes made by her. When I was young, I liked traveling to f...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... or costly meals that make me feel like Im wasting my time, money, and health. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38559322034 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60673819698 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6563498922 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675719373349 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268404924468 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241422633996 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321643659932 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02741573073 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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