Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negatice effects on society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is widely suggested that robotics are beneficial for humans in improving the quality of our life, while others believe that they are unsafe devices that could cause severe impacts on the public. This essay will discuss both statements of this controversy.
I do believe that the heavy use of technology results in the overreliance on it. It is extremely dangerous when the machine manufacturers break down, we often become helpless. For instance, I once struggled with my phone when it was out of battery. I had to do some calculations but I can not use the calculation app then it took me about 10 minutes to handle with number and finally it was wrong.
These occurrences are inevitable, however, this drawback can not outweigh the large number of benefits that robots bring us. First and foremost, robots save us an incredible amount of time and effort. A washing machine, for example, does not require the people's presence to perform its duty and takes us a little time to scrub our clothes. Secondly, robots are beneficial in working because they help us increase our accuracy. In fact, without useful machines such as computers, the work we do would be filled with imperfections and errors. Finally, robotics prevents us from getting several unwanted injuries. It is undoubted that robots handle a large number of hard workplace tasks such as lifting heavy goods or processing dangerous procedures and hazardous materials.
In conclusion, despite several irritating occurrences, I strongly believe that the increasing use of robots is much more beneficial than detrimental to our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...hine, for example, does not require the peoples presence to perform its duty and takes ...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ies. It is undoubted that robots handle a large number of hard workplace task such as lifting hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82852604248 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7661949789 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.23603664747 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147962150438 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047843792742 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331183174258 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855704626322 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476054236983 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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