Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Along with the development of technology, students today can learn not only from their teachers, but also can learn from playing games. Thus, there are some people may claim that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. However, I do not agree with this statement for the following reasons.
To begin with, it is true that students now do not need to rely on teachers to acquire new knowledge, instead, they can learn in many different ways. They can either learn knowledge in traditional ways, such as attending class, or learn from playing educational games. For example, Duolingo, a popular language app in the world. The appearance of this app has completely changed people's ideas of learning language. Before, if we want to learn English, we would have to go to cram schools or hiring a tutor to teach us, yet Duolingo allows us to learn new languages from playing games, which significantly lowered the costs of leaning languages.
However, the appearance of educational game does not necessarily mean that the values of teachers have been undermined. Since the competitions between students are more competitive today, more and more parents are willing to invest more to hire teachers to teach their children. For instance, although Duolingo provides an economic way for students to learn English, if they have any question when they are learning, they cannot get the answers of feedback immediately. Therefore, teachers still have their own advantages, because they can provide immediate feedbacks and interact with students. In that way, students do not need to sleep with their concerns that their questions are still unsolved.
Moreover, those educational games and apps still require professional teachers to design them, since software engineers may not have sufficient knowledge to create games that can educate students effectively. Hence, the success of Dulingo, is still based on the efforts of many professional teachers. Without teachers, I believe Duolingo cannot be as successful as we see today.
In conclusion, despite it may seem that students today can learn knowledge without teacher, without teachers' contribution, students may not be able to enjoy the convenience of learning that they have today. Therefore, I believe teachers are not less appreciated and valued by society today than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...instance, although Duolingo provides an economic way for students to learn English, if t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28496042216 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7516689808 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2546920745 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.277777778 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195901537185 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750064971459 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857889373416 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126360403661 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948077589619 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.