Nowadays, sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular why is it is a positive or negative development
These days, it is becoming more and more popular that sending children to boarding school. There are many reason behind this statement I believe that it is a positive development and I will elaborate in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many reasons that why people sending their children to boarding school. The first and foremost; reason is nuclear families, no doubt people busy their lifestyle. In case of nuclear family's do not spend quality time with their kids. Apart from that there are nobody to look after them. In addition to that lack of good educational institutions, some parents sending their children to boarding school because they think that it is the best way to provide good quality of education. Moreover, offspring also teach basic manners like, discipline, punctuality and so on. In boarding schools rules and regulations are very strict ,such as children who studying their do not use any type of electronic gadgets like mobile phones, computers and laptops. As a result, children learn how to maintain discipline in any situation.
On the other hand, there are several positive developments. The prominent benefit to sending children to hostel is that they become self dependent.In this case, children are handled their all work by themselves. Apart from that, they do not depend on others for their study and work . Secondly, they do not become homesick when they are go for their study to abroad. Apart from that, they are also improve there skills like communication, decision making skills and how to handle the pressure of adult life. Consequently, they can improve their decision making ability.
In conclusion, In my opinion ,it is a positive developments because there are several reasons and benefits behind sending pupils to hostel for their academices. They learn many basic skills and punctuality which are extremely beneficial for their future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19218241042 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6607534089 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4174215897 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236055356816 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770621945887 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971900440853 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165256207172 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966989871305 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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