Some poeple think that in this modern world, getting old is entirely sad. However, others people believe that old poeple is much better now than it was in the past
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, many developments in technology make our life easier. Some people think that getting old is not good and others strongly believe that the life of elder people is in good conditions as compared to the past. This essay will discuss the point of views and my opinion on it, all the explanation is given in the following paragraphs.
To comments with, many people feel extremely sad about getting old because they cannot do many tasks after reaching a certain level of age, they do not have the physical strength like adults or younger. Ultimately they are not able to perform many workloads. A result of a survey, for example, by the University of Yale, showed that 79% of people do not want to be old because when they became older, they could not explore the world and were able to work on many things. Therefore, these types of evidence prove why people get upset.
Moreover, some people think the lives of the elder people age group are much better than in the past. Since technology has become very progressive in many aspects, healthcare becomes affordable and easier to access in almost all countries. Having good medical services, the life expectancy showed an increment among people. So, they do many tasks for longer hours and age, which is far better than in the past. Research, for instance, by the University of New York suggested that after having one of the best medical facilities in the world in Japan, the overall life expectancy was inclined by 20% in two years. Overall, due to various developments in technology, which improve medical conditions and people live longer than in the past.
In conclusion, one of the reasons is that not being able to perform tasks for many people who feel strongly bad about getting old. Since technology creates affordable health care, the life of people is in good conditions. In my opinion, getting older is the natural process of human beings. However, we can grab an opportunity and improve our living conditions and life expectancy by using technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86494252874 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51409522332 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1760037326 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232604865735 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746574317551 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719019369196 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149950812944 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692987738419 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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