Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have had different opinions when it comes to the selection of jobs for younger ones while some say that it should be without any restrictions for youngers, while others it has to be realistic and also need to think about for their later years. While I understand people’s concerns about secure jobs, I still believe that having a favourable job is superior.
There are multiple reasons why people support secure places instead of job satisfaction. To comments with, If people choose a safe job without satisfaction, they will earn a certain amount of money as their salaries. When they have salaries, they will continue to feed their families and fill their dream as well. A report by the University of Gtu, for instance, suggested strongly there were closely 78,000 out of 90,000 employees in India had been selected secure positions in many workplaces regardless of working conditions and authorities because these companies provided hugely incomes. So, these types of evidence indicate that although not having satisfied at offices, factories and many more areas, people continue to have many positive developments.
People who are in favour of the former view have their own justification. Firstly, when citizens chose their suitable jobs according to their nature, they will continue to grow and do well. Apart from this, they will rapidly get higher salaries and promotions. Ultimately, companies make more profits. Since people love their working lives, their chances of having mental disorders are less which had been founded in research by google in 2019. Thus, having satisfaction in a job, people will become happier than ever, which benefits their health, family, close ones and for countries as well in many ways.
In conclusion, people are not happy with their lives at workplaces even when they had huge salaries jobs but still, it helps in many ways in from their parents to children. If they do what they want to do in terms of employment, they will not just earn money but they live their lives fullest. In my opinion, despite having a salary, people are not like their jobs, which is a reason why job selection need to be independent for younger generations regardless of thinking about futures is superior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08401084011 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59038334118 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8489943734 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366239815426 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124701449247 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793654783888 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241106698319 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591113692805 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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