Some people believe that a person improves their intellectual skills with a group of people more than by doing personal activities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is important for a person should find a group to work or study, while others believe do on own is always better than work together. In my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that work as a team is better than working lonely.
First of all, there are several positive impacts of working in groups. A team mostly requires every member to perform their skills as high as possible. For example, on working, employees can help each other which makes their progress complete faster. Moreover, when people on a group they can improve other skills by giving them feedback, which is very effective For instance, employees who have high experience working can share their knowledge with newbies so they can run the job more excellently. In addition, joining a group will create a competitive environment, which leads everyone to push them up to achieve bigger than others. For example, in a company, every person will try their best to get a promotion, which makes them receive a higher salary and help the company grow stronger than before.
On the other hand, a person who does anything by themselves can not work many objects, while groups can complete lots of tasks at the same time because they can divide jobs for each member. Moreover, a person who acts as lone wolves hard to improve their skills and work great. Besides, If these people still accept to do everything by own, they will have bad causes to both physical and mental problems.
In conclusion, from the ancient past until the present, people work together to make society more develop. Therefore, group activities do improve the intellectual abilities of an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g them feedback, which is very effective For instance, employees who have high ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85211267606 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46231263958 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3183945332 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295446375898 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103403849462 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740547787332 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19290123055 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362879425751 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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