In some countries, elderly individuals have the permission to work as long as they desire. While I agree that this tendency is able to bring several benefits, I also believe that it has some detrimental effects.
To begin with, it can be agreed that there are some advantage in this policy. The major gains from the absence of retirement age that the old would be provided the more opportunity to achieve and maintain great health, especially mental health in comprision with remaining at home for an extended period of time. Increasing more physical activities and interacting with partner in workplace not only cultivate a postive emotions but also keep the old folk from feeling lonely or stress when their child rarely spend time with them. Besides, people who are older usually have a lot more experience in work than those who are younger due to the fact that they can make a great contribution for society. This enable the community to develop more and older are also earned a high salary and able to meet their living expenses.
Despite these afore mentioned benefits, there are some negative aspects do exist. When it comes to the elderly, their state of health is a problem should be taken into consideration because the old can suffer from many health issues such as memory loss or heart deseases. It is evident that the more older people get, the worse their thinking ability and physical becomes. As a result, this fact have an adverse impact on working performance or even they our health, especially with high-risk job. Furthemore, it is noticeable that the older labors could lead to the increase of unemployment rate. Many youngsters who just graduated would have to struggle in finding job when the old citizens are formidable candidates because they are rich experience and profession.
In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that allowing elderly to work bring about certain benefits but negative consequences should not be overlooked. This issue should be considered as a pressing issue to ensure the better future for the next generation.
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views a 84
- Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00289855072 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61481729404 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0982328158 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161697184634 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543727429849 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405723512684 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964686574523 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299243929627 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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