Having good neighborhood can make our life forge. However, in this contemporary era people rarely rely on their neighborhood than in the past. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the most fundamental factor was in the past to depends on nearby people was lack of resources and facilities. In the past, people were unable to fix their problems via itself. There were less earning and machine, which can make life comfort and easy as in present. So pupil had to share things with neighborhood like sharing in transportation and in physical work such as harvesting and helping each other in bad weather condition. People at present, on the other hand, have fast life possible due to great contribution of technology such as personal transportation, heavy machine for agriculture, greater career option,easy access of food. To exemplify, nowadays if housekeeper felt sick nowadays, one can order food online, can hire a care tacker or can cook for himself via learning using technology.
moreover, people in the past stay at a single place for whole of their life, so they had prmanent neighborhood, which create strong bonding among them. They involve each other in every moment whatever it sad or happy. they felt themselve more secure by founding their nearby pupil around them to have healthy conversation because there were less sources of entertainment. Inversely, today modern world have greater security system ,digital fingerprint based lock system so no worry about robbery. Amost all age group of family can take care of themseleve in this busy life having their personal smartphone and enjoy their own company doing things alone like doing exercise ,watching television.
In conclusion, people today are less dependent upon neighborhood because they are busy in their life have good entertainment devices.and beacuse access of goods and other important things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77658093874 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9764215648 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158705695926 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569023715414 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497721361392 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099533763802 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249414977921 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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