The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
The given diagram illustrates the production of orange juice.
Overall, it is seen clearly from the given diagram that the process starting with collecting fresh oranges and ending with the distribution to shops.
To comments with, the overall production of orange juice starts with collecting oranges, next, which send to the factory via trucks. In the factory, picked oranges go to the cleaning process to the washing machine in the third stage. Moreover, washed oranges go to the squeezing machine, which extracts fresh juice and waste. Where solids waste uses in feeding animals. In step-5, the fresh juice goes for the packaging process and then sends to shops.
Furthermore, the fresh juice sends for evaporation to a machine in step 5 via refrigerator trucks. In addition, the evaporation machine boils fresh juice, makes it concentrate, and remove water. Concentrate juice store in large cans in the canning process in stage7. In the next step, filled cans are store in the warehouse via trucks. In the factory, water is added with this concentrated juice, then goes for packaging in the nine-stage. After finishing the packaging method, it sends to supermarkets for sale at the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., which extracts fresh juice and waste. Where solids waste uses in feeding animals. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, then, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19072164948 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66881412187 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1877104154 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149216522812 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598123585541 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567480765697 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118465199072 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536183165063 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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