Solutions to prevent injuries of glass to birds.
The reading passage and the speaker both explore the topic of solutions to prevent injures of glass to birds. However, the speaker discords with the ideas in the reading passage. He casts doubt on the article for the following reasons.
First of all, the speaker opposes the idea related to the use of one-way glass. Although the reading passage suggests that the bird can notice the difference when they see the one-side glass, the speaker points out that this kind of glass wich create a mirror-like effect, is meaningless to prevent birds flying toward it. Hence, the speaker concludes that the option will not be a proper solution.
Furthermore, while the article indicates that painting on the glass can be effective as well, the speaker argues that birds will still precede fly right into the blank spaces on the glass, which for bird, it is like an opening hole, moreover, increase the painted area to cover up the “hole” will not be a preferable choice for the human living in the building. Therefore, the second solution will not be considered.
Last but not least, the speaker refutes the reading passage by mentioning solution of applying a magnetic field. Even though the article states that this will help changing the direction, the speaker rejects the idea by bringing up a reason that birds normally use eyes and the brightness of light to distinguish the direction when they fly in a short distance. Thus, the creation of the magnetic field will be pointless.
To sum up, the speaker tends to disagree with the points in the article due to the unconvincing arguments presented in the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to change' or 'change'.
Suggestion: to change; change
... the article states that this will help changing the direction, the speaker rejects the ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91240875912 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50239376048 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.9129718333 49.2860985944 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06452816374 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229870045073 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785050242441 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899991240803 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120078732165 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756801794189 0.0443174109184 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.