Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express their thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that artists require freedom of expression to some extent to develop innovative creativity whereas others opine that full freedom to express ideas and opinons need to give for artists. In my point of view, there should be enough freedom for artists to create imagination as well as ideas but full freedom is not required.
On the other hand, there should be limitation on artists freedom. First and foremost, artists should not make arts out of bothering people, hurting their sentiments and stirring up nuisance. The full freedom of expression is only valid when artist do not dammage people’s feelings. The author salmon rushdie’s controversy after publishing his new novel and painter MF Hussain controversy, for example, all are dammaging human emotions,culture and put bad examples of bad artists’s example.
To begin with, artists should liberty to express their own ideas and opions without causing consequences. When they have freedom, more and more people will turn their thoughts into arts and this will enrich culture and civilasation regardless of any nations. Futher more, artists acted as a social justies in the contemporary world. To illustrate this regard, a rape case of 8 years girl in vietnam, a handful of people express their anger and emotions through songs and these songs became viral on social media. Thus, this action is very meaningful for arousing interest in a certain number of people in art and this help current society deal with criminals circurstances .
In pithy, some amount of freedom for artists to strive is essential, however, it would be a detrimental effect if there are full freedom for artists for the reason that they may cause negative impact on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17081850534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70057521346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4702194919 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418609298222 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154439475678 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843301704264 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24470528949 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600390558469 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.