The graph compares how much electricity was generated and consumed in the top ten countries in 2014.
It is noticeable that China was the largest electricity producer and consumer in 2014. It also can be seen that the production of electricity was more than its consumption among the countries except for Germaney whose electricity generation was less than electricity consumption.
In China, 5,398 billion kwh of electricity was produced in 2014 with electricity consumption of 5,322 billion kwh. The United States was in second place, producing 4,099 billion kwh electricity, while American people consumed 3,866 billion kwh electricity. By contrast, the production and consumption of electricity in Russia was much less than those in China and America, with only 1,057 billion kwh and 1,038 billion kwh, respectively.
While the other seven countries produced and consumed less electricity in 2014, with amounts under 1,000 billion kwh. While the number of electricity production was above 500 billion kwh in Japan(936.2), India(871), Canada(618.9), France(561.2), Brazil(530.7) and Germany(526.6), the figures for electricity consumption in Canada and Brazil were below 500 billion kwh. Korea, Rep produced and consumed less electricity than the other nine countries, at 485.1 billion kwh and 449.5 billion kwh, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66834170854 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06005808044 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.40588511 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155119576929 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955571019856 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057327438141 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136198929353 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492160894994 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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