Generally, the consumption of water used in agriculture is significantly higher than industrial and domestic use in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, while North Americans and Europeans consume more water in industry. Domestic water use accounts for the smallest part of the overall proportion of water use in these 6 areas.
The consumption of water used in agriculture is above 80% of the overall percentage in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, at about 84%, 88% and 81%, respectively. Similarly, a considerably higher proportion can be seen in South America (71%).
However, 48 and 53 percent of water is used in North America and Europe takes up the largest part of water consumption, compared to only about 7% in Africa, 5% in Central Asia, 12% in South East Asia and 10% in South America. Domestic water consumption is above 10% in North and South America, and Europe, at 13%, 10%, and 15%, respectively, while figures for the other three areas are below.
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try harder enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children children this message 73
- Language teachers should concentrate on giving positive feedback to students when they do good work rather than on criticising bad work Do you agree or disagree 73
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 73
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 56
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97005988024 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78144840564 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3935403581 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125578437484 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778161136366 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471045183207 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971632830314 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320526626895 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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