Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The following appeared a note from a sedan owner to a friend.
“Of the two top brands of cars introduced in past year, Kia cars are clearly more superior to the competing Alfa cars. Kia cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 50 kms per litre. In the past quarter alone, 8000 Kia cars were sold. Alfa cars, on the other hand have received only a few positive reviews regarding their overall performance. I have personally test driven both brands, and I strongly recommend that you buy a Kia car for superior performance at a cost-effective price.”
The following appeared a note from a sedan owner to a friend. Author drawn conclusion that, of the two top brands of cars introduced in past year, Kia cars are clearly more superior to competing Alfa cars, strongly recommend that buy a kia car for superior performance at a cost-effective price. There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence.
Firstly, Author state that Kia cars boast aesthetically pleasing design and a fuel economy of 50 kms per litre. Author assumes that, aesthetically pleasing design and fuel economy which are sole factor which attract the customer to buy car. It might possibility that, having pleasant aesthetic look and fuel economy whether it is affordable to people. Author need an price of car and maintenance required for car, it might possibility that it takes several maintenance which cost more as compared to its price. In this people may not prefer to buy Kia cars, so the arguments may become weaken.
Secondly, author state that in past quarter alone, 8000 kia cars were sold. Author assume that, total 8000 cars which are sold are of new brands. Author need to categories this 8000 sold car, exactly how much of them sold are of newly introduced car. It might possibility out of 8000 cars, only 1000 newly introduced cars were sold. Author state that, on the other hand Alfa cars received only a few positive reviews regarding their overall performance. Author assume that, Alfa cars have certain drawback, so that it got fewer positive reviews regarding their overall performance. It might possibility of that, Alfa cars survey customers requirement, their usability so that they improve in their final product.
Thirdly, author mention that he personally test driven both brands and strongly recommend that buy a kia car for superior performance at a cost-effective price. Author assume that Kia car gives superior performance at a cost-effective price. It might be possibility author take little drive on which basis he concluded that, Kia motor gives superior performance. Author need survey of people who uses for long run purpose, what are issue face by them. It might possibility that, for long run cars fails in mechanical functioning.
In conclusion, author need to check all the point before drawing any conclusion. There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence then only argument become strengthen.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...it is affordable to people. Author need an price of car and maintenance required f...
^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun maintenance seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some maintenance'.
Suggestion: some maintenance
...car, it might possibility that it takes several maintenance which cost more as compared to its pric...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...kes several maintenance which cost more as compared to its price. In this people m...
^^
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence then...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 13.6137724551 191% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 396.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15404040404 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70048927649 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2960682443 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7727272727 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972721758176 0.218282227539 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413638813797 0.0743258471296 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637389771949 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079391030858 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511285562555 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...it is affordable to people. Author need an price of car and maintenance required f...
^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun maintenance seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some maintenance'.
Suggestion: some maintenance
...car, it might possibility that it takes several maintenance which cost more as compared to its pric...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...kes several maintenance which cost more as compared to its price. In this people m...
^^
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence then...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 13.6137724551 191% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 396.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15404040404 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70048927649 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2960682443 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7727272727 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972721758176 0.218282227539 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413638813797 0.0743258471296 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637389771949 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079391030858 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511285562555 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.