It is true that an increasing number of people are migrating to metropolises in the hope of better opportunities, but life, in reality, is indeed difficult. This essay will discuss the drawbacks of city life and measures that governments can take steps to mitigate these disadvantages.
As people live in an urban area, several related problems can be anticipated. Firstly, low-income people could not afford high-cost living in sprawling cities. As more people flock to cities for finding decent jobs, there is an increasing demand for living space, which results in high pay for accommodation that those people can not pay for. Another problem is the poor drainage system. Due to rundown infrastructure and low altitude in some areas, roads, curbs, and even houses are drawn on rainy days, which may lead to more car accidents and damages to flooded houses.
There are several actions that government could take to solve the problems described above. firstly, a simple solution would be to building industry areas on the outskirts of cities. As the result of that change, a myriad of jobs can be created, which helps inhabitants make a living for their families and reduce the number of migrants to the cities. The second measure could be for governments to upgrade infrastructure facilities in areas affected by rain. Governments should repair damaged roads and reinforce drainage systems for betterment. Therefore, a low percentage of accidents and increasing living standards are expected.
In conclusion, high-cost living and poor infrastructure are 2 primary reasons contributing to the difficulties of migrating people. Fortunately, there are various solutions that government can use to tackle these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
... to solve the problems described above. firstly, a simple solution would be to building...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36900369004 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9643791496 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1800383142 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336779121267 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898573838304 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705187838493 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189776581227 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790137862863 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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