Even in a bad situation there's always a positive outcome while some individual's deem that it is good to face bad situation along with unsatifactory job or lack of money whereas other believes instead of facing find a way to overcome. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, nowadays facing a bad situation become a major concern every age group people face some unpleasant day at least once in their life it teaches various essential stuffs of life so somehow a good illustration of this is if we look towards past of any successful businessman or any well-liked person they all face bad situation along with money crises in their past once after that they become popular so the bad time teach how to work more hard as well as it also analysis of person's potential.
On the other hand, instead of facing troublesome situation some multitudes opine to recover come out from it by the help of smart work because not all time hard work works there are many people who are struggling yet after doing hard work in this case the unpleasant moment become permanent from temporary so that in should always try to find a ways to overcome the situation, for instance look at Elon musk CEO of tesla motors and chief engineer of SpaceX compony he go through with various financial crises but get attention of NASA by smart work and they help him to tackle with all unfavorable situation.
In conclusion, I would say every has a silver lining so never stop searching way to overcome from any situation by dint of no come to assist if individual cannot help himself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, whereas, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62975778547 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49623703584 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.879259854 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.6 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.8 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153850486079 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869467546479 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811889933167 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990648942307 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608551288381 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.0946893788 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 11.3001002004 215% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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